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Those days when you don't know what to do
You're sitting there wondering if anyone cares
You start to feel like all those bad things are true
Nothing is getting easier in your daily affairs
Your emotions begin to overwhelm you
The smallest things spark the anger inside
Not to mention your composure falls through
You realize the darkness you live alongside
My emotions eat me alive like a raging beast
I can't keep up this false facade much longer
The evil in me is having a delicious feast
I can't see the light or myself getting stronger
I want to simply die and be done with it
I know no one will think about or miss me
Society is the only place I'll never fit
I just wish that everyone I know could see
That I don't ask for much. Just some loyalty
Now I'm asking for a way out. Knife or gun
At least in my last moments I'll have some fun

Good bye society and all the anxiety you caused me
Good bye world and all the misfortune you brought me
Good bye you fake friends and the tears you tore from me
Good bye everyone. I'll finally be at peace and out of your way
Because after you read this, you'll know I was finally free today.

I've hit one of those moods again.

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SirAlianora Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm with ya, buddy. :l
Fantastic poem, though.The rhyming sounded natural, and I love that you didn't use commas.

Please don't kill yourself, though~
Life's bad enough without people other people care about dropping out of it forever, and you especially would know that. And I'm sure there are people who really do truly love and care for you.
S'don't give up.
Shattered-Writer Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. Glad to know someone understands.
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